This year for camp we went to hanmer springs. I made a camp recount on what happened at camp here is my work it took me a very long time to make because I get very sidetrack.
Your camp sounds like it was so much fun! The walk up Conagil Hill sounds exhausting, I probably would gone the cheat way too! Your recount is amazing, I think you might just have to go through and check your punctuation.
Your camp sounds like it was so much fun! The walk up Conagil Hill sounds exhausting, I probably would gone the cheat way too! Your recount is amazing, I think you might just have to go through and check your punctuation.
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