Friday, 3 August 2018

My Treasure

My treasure
WALT: Use conjunctions to join our ideas together
WALT: Include descriptive detail

In this activity we also had to do FANBOYS if you don't know what FANBOYS are they are   conjunctions (for and nor but or yet so) - they are the fanboys. Have a look and see if you can find three FANBOYS in my writing and comment them down below

This task was took a lot of time but it ended out to be great.

How I think I went with the WALT was It was a little tricky at first but I got the hang of it.

Overall this activity was very interesting and a little tricky  

Bye for now 👍😀😁


  1. Kia Ora Adison, I found it interesting that your treasure was a photo album fulled with your memories when you were younger. It was also cool that you added a activity for others. The 3 Fanboys that you have is For, But , and. Kai Pai Adison
    From Ruby

  2. Hello Adison, by setting a challenge in your writing, made me really read your writing instead of skimming over it. I did find the three FANBOYS - and, but and for. So congratulations on achieving success with your learning intention of using conjunctions. Not only did you achieve this learning intention but also including descriptive language. I learnt a lot about your photo album. My special treasure would be the silver locket necklace that my nana left for me.
    Kind regards
    Mrs England


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