tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2261930505932847103.post5592836537028450051..comments2023-05-03T21:25:21.025+12:00Comments on Adison @ GMS: My Treasure Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2261930505932847103.post-40290562224577630972018-08-15T13:40:45.818+12:002018-08-15T13:40:45.818+12:00Hello Adison, by setting a challenge in your writi...Hello Adison, by setting a challenge in your writing, made me really read your writing instead of skimming over it. I did find the three FANBOYS - and, but and for. So congratulations on achieving success with your learning intention of using conjunctions. Not only did you achieve this learning intention but also including descriptive language. I learnt a lot about your photo album. My special treasure would be the silver locket necklace that my nana left for me.<br />Kind regards<br />Mrs EnglandAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17386480869060228067noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2261930505932847103.post-38645296370928113332018-08-06T09:45:24.837+12:002018-08-06T09:45:24.837+12:00Kia Ora Adison, I found it interesting that your t...Kia Ora Adison, I found it interesting that your treasure was a photo album fulled with your memories when you were younger. It was also cool that you added a activity for others. The 3 Fanboys that you have is For, But , and. Kai Pai Adison <br />From Ruby Ruby https://www.blogger.com/profile/17910741719736256328noreply@blogger.com