Writing (Girl and Giraffe)

WALT: Write an interesting sentences to describe

Another thing we did for writing this week was to describe and make a story from a photo. I chose to write a narrative and include my descriptive sentences in the story. 

I think I had a good hook to get the audience interested in reading my writing. My next learning step is to use simile and metaphor to describe.

How many adjectives can you find in my writing?

It needed to happen. He couldn’t take it anymore. He needed to go home. I had had him every day since I can remember.

I love him but he is getting too big for the house. You can’t replace a dude like him, with his big black eyes, black spots, long legs, and his ratty tail, that can’t be forgotten. My mum said I had to him take home I told her he was home with me. Me and him both knew we would never see each other again. I had to walk him down to his habitat my mum had no car. Taking him home was the worst thing that ever happened to me. The grass wet and cold I packed him a blanket so he would remember my smell. We walked and walked to where supposedly his family was living on the way. I told him stories of what it would be like with his family, it was almost like he was listening to me. After a while we found his mother and father eating leaves. When we first seen them, his eyes widened. I took off his lead and let him go. I was bawling! I knew I would miss him but it was the right thing to do.

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